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−	Ordin Zarn inspired this song while trapped in [[Mr. Smith]]'s phylactery.	+	Ordin Zarn inspired this song while trapped in [[Mr. Smith]]'s phylactery and sent it out into the world. Ordin says he was aided by a "divine presence." Given Ordin's past, we extrapolate that this was a trickster god.

	((This excellent song was actually created by Joe Pug. See http://joepugmusic.com/lyrics/hymn-101/))		((This excellent song was actually created by Joe Pug. See http://joepugmusic.com/lyrics/hymn-101/))

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 |1: Residents of [[Icewatch]] remember Ordin as a stubborn boy.<br/>
 : When Ordin returned to [[Icewatch]] while looking for his father, he was even more abrupt and rude.<br/>
-: On [[Tessera]], "awful grace" refers to divine judgment or reckoning. For example, the [[Blood Debt]] is seen as an awful reckoning for creating [[Graven Hulks|graven hulks]]. (Joe Pug didn't capitalize "god" so presumably Ordin didn't.)
+: On [[Tessera]], "awful grace" refers to divine judgment or reckoning. For example, the [[Blood Debt]] is seen as an awful reckoning for creating [[Graven Hulks|graven hulks]]. (Joe Pug didn't capitalize "god" so presumably Ordin didn't.)<br/>
 : Tundin hid something in Ordin's body, possibly a portal key. When [[Mr. Smith]] imprisoned Ordin in his phylactery, he destroyed Ordin's body. But the treasure may still be hidden in Ordin's ghost.
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 I’ve come to say exactly what I mean<br/>
 And I mean so many things
-|1: Ordin is obsessed with saving his father. He has ignored requests for his aid (e.g., from the [[Unbroken Tide]])
+|1: Ordin is obsessed with saving his father. He has ignored requests for his aid (e.g., from the [[Unbroken Tide]]).
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 Strips me of my jacket and my vest<br/>
 And reveals all the treasure in my chest
-|1: Residents of [[Icewatch]] remember Ordin as a stubborn boy<br/>
+|1: Residents of [[Icewatch]] remember Ordin as a stubborn boy.<br/>
-: When Ordin returned to [[Icewatch]] while looking for his father, he was even more abrupt and rude<br/>
+: When Ordin returned to [[Icewatch]] while looking for his father, he was even more abrupt and rude.<br/>
 : On [[Tessera]], "awful grace" refers to divine judgment or reckoning. For example, the [[Blood Debt]] is seen as an awful reckoning for creating [[Graven Hulks|graven hulks]]. (Joe Pug didn't capitalize "god" so presumably Ordin didn't.)
 : Tundin hid something in Ordin's body, possibly a portal key. When [[Mr. Smith]] imprisoned Ordin in his phylactery, he destroyed Ordin's body. But the treasure may still be hidden in Ordin's ghost.

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 |3: On [[Tessera]], the [[Unraveler]] is someone who comes from "down the road" with an unrelenting stride. Ordin seems to compare his approach to the inevitability of death. This could mean that he expects to kill others, that he expects to die, or both.<br/>
 : In his investigation, Ordin consulted with at least several diviners. This may be because he's an arcanist himself and knows the potential power of divination. However, this is at least partly why the [[Brotherhood of the Shroud|Brotherhood]] and [[League of the Rusted Crown|League]] started targeting diviners: to thwart investigators like Ordin.<br/>
-([[Alpine Autumn Sky]], a diviner, said this to Proud Flame, after he rescued her from [[Gelganag]].)
+([[Alpine Autumn Sky]], a diviner, said this to Proud Flame after he rescued her from [[Gelganag]].)
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 |3: On [[Tessera]], the [[Unraveler]] is someone who comes from "down the road" with an unrelenting stride. Ordin seems to compare his approach to the inevitability of death. This could mean that he expects to kill others, that he expects to die, or both.<br/>
 : In his investigation, Ordin consulted with at least several diviners. This may be because he's an arcanist himself and knows the potential power of divination. However, this is at least partly why the [[Brotherhood of the Shroud|Brotherhood]] and [[League of the Rusted Crown|League]] started targeting diviners: to thwart investigators like Ordin.<br/>
-(Alpine Autumn Sky said this to Proud Flame, after he rescued her from Gelganag.)
+([[Alpine Autumn Sky]], a diviner, said this to Proud Flame, after he rescued her from [[Gelganag]].)
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 Before we met I knew we’d meet<br/>
 Before we met I knew we’d meet
-|3: On [[Tessera]], the [[Unraveler]] is someone who comes from "down the road" with an unrelenting stride. Ordin seems to comparing his approach to the inevitability of death.<br/>
+|3: On [[Tessera]], the [[Unraveler]] is someone who comes from "down the road" with an unrelenting stride. Ordin seems to compare his approach to the inevitability of death. This could mean that he expects to kill others, that he expects to die, or both.<br/>
 : In his investigation, Ordin consulted with at least several diviners. This may be because he's an arcanist himself and knows the potential power of divination. However, this is at least partly why the [[Brotherhood of the Shroud|Brotherhood]] and [[League of the Rusted Crown|League]] started targeting diviners: to thwart investigators like Ordin.<br/>
 (Alpine Autumn Sky said this to Proud Flame, after he rescued her from Gelganag.)

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 I’ve come to trade the harvest for the seed<br/>
 I’ve come to trade the harvest for the seed
-|1: [[The League of the Rusted Crown]] teaches [[adintech]] on different worlds in exchange for some of the [[bloodstones]] their students produce<br/>
+|1: The [[League of the Rusted Crown]] teaches [[adintech]] on different worlds in exchange for some of the [[bloodstones]] their students produce<br/>
 : [[Reavers|Reaver cloakers]] can be mistaken for men in raincoats and move very fast.<br/>
 -5: Some evidence suggests that Ordin was willing to trade [[adintech]] products (like [[bloodstones]]) back to the League in exchange for the secret of Tundinzarn's creation, in order to free his father. The "seed" is some secrets of adintech.

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 I’ve come to test the timbre of my heart<br/>
 I‘ve come to test the timbre of my heart
-|2: According to Ordin, a "lazy horse" is a useless public official<br/>
+|2: According to Ordin, a "lazy horse" is a useless public official.<br/>
 : Tundin spent time in Sigil, including playing and relaxing at several establishments run by the Society of Sensation.<br/>
--5: Tundin fell in love with someone in Sigil, but rather than settle down, he continued his search<br/>
+-5: Tundin fell in love with someone in Sigil, but rather than settle down, he continued his search.<br/>
 ([[Brother Iron]] was singing this verse when Lyndi and Jane met him at Granny Bones' Bookshop.)
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 |1: Ordin's father is [[Tundin Zarn]]. Tundin was passionate about exploring the multiverse and kept a list of locations he wanted to visit.<br/>
 : Tundin grew up in [[Icewatch]], so he would have participated in the rare ceremony when a ship broke up on the rocks.<br/>
-: The people of Icewatch are fishers and crafters, so they rarely dress in fancy attire<br/>
+: The people of Icewatch are fishers and crafters, so they rarely dress in fancy attire.<br/>
-: When lighthouse at [[Icewatch]] was refitted with a [[Bloodstone|bloodstone]] light, it became unreliable. Shipwrecks became more common.<br/>
+: When lighthouse at [[Icewatch]] was refitted with a [[Bloodstones|bloodstone]] light, it became unreliable. Shipwrecks became more common.<br/>
-: A Tesseran custom: the pennies are for the dead to pay the ferryman in the afterlife
+: A Tesseran custom: the pennies are for the dead to pay the ferryman in the afterlife.
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-| style="width: 50%"|'''1'''<br/>
+| style="width: 35%"|'''1'''<br/>
 And I’ve come to know the wishlist of my father<br/>
 I’ve come to know the shipwrecks where he wished<br/>